>> Could you upload this on Google Docs, so that we can add comments? > > Here's the link: > http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AfeRjrG1DMb8ZGZoeHZ3OXRfMTZjZHg4OHBjYw&hl=en Ok, great. If you now also make this editable, I will insert my comments. (try "Share -> Invite people ...")