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Re: [WWW] Update index.html and gcc-5/changes.html to reflect offloading changes.


Hi Kirill,

On Friday 2014-12-12 14:43, Kirill Yukhin wrote:
> These change adds mention of OpenMP4 offloading support in GCC: in 
> release notes and in news section of main page.

good you thought of that, thank you!

> Index: htdocs/index.html
> ===================================================================
> + <dt><span>OpenMP 4.0 offloading support in GCC</span>
> +     <span class="date">[2014-12-12]</span></dt>
> +     <dd><a href="http://www.openmp.org/mp-documents/OpenMP4.0.0.pdf";>
> +     OpenMP 4.0</a> offloading features support was added to GCC. Generic changes:

How about omitting "features" in the above?

> +     <li>Generic infrastructure (suitable for any vendor).</li>
> +     <li>Testsuite which covers offloading from
> +     <a href="http://openmp.org/mp-documents/OpenMP4.0.0.Examples.pdf";>
> +     OpenMP 4.0 Examples</a> document.</li>

"from the"

> +     Specific for upcoming Intel MIC products:

Is everyone aware what MIC stands for, or is that the marketing
name?

> +     <li>Runtime library.</li>

I believe that would be "run-time library"?

> +    Contributed by Jakub Jelinek (RedHat), Thomas Schwinge (CodeSourcery),

Red Hat.  It's Red Hat.  Two words.  Why does "everybody" get 
this wrong?

> +     Bernd Schmidt (CodeSourcery), Andrey Turetskiy (Intel),
> +     Ilya Verbin (Intel) and Kirill Yukhin (Intel).</dd></dt>

How about if you contract this to "Thomas Schwinge and Bernd
Schmidt (CodeSourcery)" and similarly for you guys from Intel?

Incidently the alphabetical ordering nicely supports this here.

Note: Schwinge > Schmidt, so I think you'll want to switch those two.


That said, overall this is a bit too long for an entry on the home
page.  Can you put all those details in the gcc-5/changes.html page
(this is good material) and link to it from a shortened entry for
the home page?


> Index: htdocs/gcc-5/changes.html
> ===================================================================
>   <h2 id="languages">New Languages and Language specific 
> improvements</h2> + <ul> + <li><a 
> href="http://www.openmp.org/mp-documents/OpenMP4.0.0.pdf";> OpenMP 4.0 
> + specification</a> offloading features are now supported in C/C++ and 
> + Fortran compiler</li> + </ul>

"supported by the C, C++ and Fortran compilers" (plural)

(This adds "the", but also splits C and C++ which really are to
different compilers in many ways.  No need to be shy. ;-)

Given the number of suggestions, in this case I'd prefer to have
another look at an updated version.  Now that I am back online, I
should be able to turn this quickly.

Gerald


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