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Re: [PATCH] gcc-3.4/changes.html: Document the m68k-uclinux targetand ColdFire enhancements
- From: Gerald Pfeifer <gerald at pfeifer dot com>
- To: Bernardo Innocenti <bernie at develer dot com>
- Cc: GCC Patches <gcc-patches at gcc dot gnu dot org>
- Date: Sun, 12 Oct 2003 21:26:16 +0200 (CEST)
- Subject: Re: [PATCH] gcc-3.4/changes.html: Document the m68k-uclinux targetand ColdFire enhancements
- References: <3F88C7BE.8010301@develer.com>
On Sun, 12 Oct 2003, Bernardo Innocenti wrote:
> It might need some kind of rephrasing to sound good for native
> English/American speakers.
Well, I'm not a native speaker either, but let me have a look. ;-)
> +++ changes.html 12 Oct 2003 03:07:24 -0000
> + <li>Bernardo Innocenti (Develer S.r.l.) has contributed
> + the <code>m68k-uclinux</code> target, based on former work done
> + by Paul Dale (SnapGear Inc.). Code generation for the
> + <code>ColdFire</code> processors family has been enhanced and extended
> + to support <code>MCF 53xx</code> and <code>MCF 54xx</code>
> + cores, integrating former work done by Peter Barada (Motorola).</li>
I would add "the" before "cores" and avoid the <code> for ColdFire and
MCF 53xx and MCF 54xx.
Also I recommend to remove between first and last names, as this
may make automatic formatting relative tough in some situations.
> + similar to the <code>arm-pe</code> target, but it defaults to using the APCS32
Would you mind splitting this long line?
And thanks for also taking care of the other small issues you fixed; just
briefly mention them (in an abstract way) in the CVS log as well.
Please apply you patch with these changes and post the updated version
afterwards.
Thanks,
Gerald
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